Finding a True Love

Upon this primrose hill
Where heaven would still,
I walked to find true love
Audacious like dove.

While waiting, I will write a manuscript
About losing a grip.
All thoughts of sex and think to move
My love to study her and not to love.

But where to find a true love?
Love like that from above;
Where the two of us could lay
The bars from relay

This is my first poem na naipost ko dito. Sana ay okey naman at pasado sa inyo. Actually, marami pa akong naisulat na poems at ngayon ko lang naisipan na nagsulat ng poem here sa blog ko. Sana ay okey lang. Salamat sa lahat!

11 comments:

great poem!:D
i love it!;)

August 27, 2007 at 8:21 AM comment-delete

hi, nakita mo na ba ang "true love" mo? hehehe musta na po?

August 27, 2007 at 8:38 AM comment-delete

wow, nice naman :)

August 28, 2007 at 4:25 AM comment-delete

Ok lang po ako:) Salamat sa pagdaan! Ingats!

Yen
August 28, 2007 at 5:58 AM comment-delete

"Love like that from above"

it's true.

love here in on earth is powerless against the love above.

August 28, 2007 at 5:26 PM comment-delete

tara! yoga sa sat!

August 28, 2007 at 6:05 PM comment-delete

wow inspired...

August 28, 2007 at 10:51 PM comment-delete

nice one :D sana wala ng nude pics

August 29, 2007 at 1:26 AM comment-delete

hey, sorry this is offtopic, you left a message that you want to have your own domain, now how can I help you? :)

August 29, 2007 at 2:00 AM comment-delete

hhehhe uy.. finding true LOVE?? naku it's better to w8 then never.. joke... gud lak..

August 29, 2007 at 4:11 AM comment-delete

Once you know what love is, that's when you will find it.

August 30, 2007 at 1:37 PM comment-delete